Here's another short story, written after watching video footage of a huge chunk of glacier calving off its parent and tumbling into the sea. At points, it looked to me like some huge creature breaching the water and then sinking back under the waves. I simply illustrated it literally for this story, and then let the story take me where it would...
Creature from
the Past
The creature breached the surface of
the water with a terrific rush of water. Its humped black back appeared out of
the white crests of foam, the ancient skin lined with white scars from great
battles past and encrusted with barnacles. A single eye appeared—surprisingly
small for something so huge—,its surface a deep gold
with copper flecks. It watched the sailors as its head surged into the open air
and a spray of mist shot into the air from its blowhole. It heaved a great
breath into its lungs—lungs so huge, a single gulp of air could last it for
millennia—the noise a deep, rumbling moan that sent deep shock waves rippling
through the ocean and made the seabed tremble thousands of feet below the
water’s surface.
The sailors watched the creature
with a deep sense of awe, even as they knew that it was the last thing they
would ever see. One of them had a photo of his wife in his hand. Another thought
of a bar tab he’d left unpaid at a pub back on shore. The captain simply touched
his fingers lightly to the railing of his beloved ship. They all watched in
silence as the beast finished drawing in a lungful of air, and they watched as
it slowly sank back beneath the waves.
Like a sinking island, the monster’s
back plunged back into the depths of the ocean, the foaming whitecaps closing
over its black hide and swirling downward with the creature’s body in a powerful
whirlpool. The little fishing ship and its twelve occupants were caught in the
current, and were swept inwards and downwards after the great beast of the sea
like a leaf being swept away by a stream. The hull dipped when they reached the
center, and the rest of the ship shortly followed. When the water finally closed
over the stern of the ship and the last bit of driftwood was sucked downward
into the whirlpool, the waves surged back up and slowly settled, leaving little
more than a few bubbles and a lonely seagull to tell the tale.
Once more, the great kraken slept,
and with it, all those who might of spoken of its return to the surface.
THE
END
As usual, the next chapter of Centaur Ranch is up. To anyone who's picking it up right in the middle , I advise you to find the e-book on lulu.com and read the whole thing from start to finish.
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